by Rheingold
Wow, you get a 5 from me just for having the same first name as someone who I used to like, and it wouldn't surprise me if she wrote this poem. |
by Sweet lig
Great! and this is really true.. amazing i love the story i hope a lot of readers can relate. great emotion keep it up5/5 |
by Misstress
This a very well written piece. |
by Natalie
Wowee-- I must say this was ALOT better then I had expected. Your flow was very smooth, and I loved the words you chose for your rhyme scheme. |
by LadyPearl
Nice job. Great emotion. Your flow was also consistant. That's good. It's a beautiful poem even though it's a bit long for my taste. |
by Kalgalath
Whoa. that is like...i dont know. i cant even say what im feeling from that. |
by x.Athame.x
Very nice. Flowing, and eloquent, with much meaning. If you could be so kind, as to glance at mine, t'would be much appreciated. But anyway, very nice. 5/5 |
I absluetlyy looved it.. it's defintly one of my favorite poems.. you discribed the scean so perfectly that i have a mental image burned in my brain..! |
by Bret Higgins
It's been written with careful consideration, but it's really too long. You could say everything you need to express in less than half of the verses. |
by Laurie Tran
WHOO!! GO MINDY!!! I TOLD YOU YOU WERE A BETTER POET!! yet you didnt believe me! hhaha |
For being 13 this poem is really good. You said you were rusty but the truth is your really good. It's sad but true. Plenty of kids go through this. Great write. |
by Kimmaly
*Claping* Wonderful......speechless......wonderful piece. |
by ASPHYXIATED
I loved the little introduction! Really original. =) |
by nikki
Wow! im speechless!! good job 5/5!!! |
by Katie
~ ~ i really liked this poem, its really strong. ~ ~ |
Its an awesome poem i like it |
by Jenni Marie
Wow! I loved this, the flow was perfect and even though it was long it kept my attention. Excellent job. |
by Letty
I must say that when I first decided to read and comment on this poem, I thought that it would be similar to most of the love poems that I have already read. But it's not, it's really quit unique. I loved the flow of it, the emotion that was put into it and I loved the hold imagery of it and the concept . This was a amazing poem. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Keep up the good work. 5/5 |
by Sammie Jo
Hey, I love this Poem it's awesome, and so sweet. Sam |
by Andi
I LOVED IT!!! ur so talented 4 how young u r....i wish i'd been able 2 write so well at that age.....thx 4 the comment....i always appreciate them! def keep up the good work |