Wow amazing poem!
it was long... but the flow kept me reading and reading...

Keep it up!

I think everyone should have put 5/5 cause this was the best dang poem ive ever read and that forsure well keep it up ur a great writer.
5/5

I LOVE this poem!! It describes a forbidden love so perfectly

I think this is a very unique poem it reminds me of me actually .

Awesome one! go girl! thats da way , your poem is realli inspiring. 5/5 from me as well. hope to see more poems from u anytime!

Hi, a great poem lots of emotion in it sounds a bit like romeo and juillet fanctastic! keep it up

I liked the poem, but I have never been a fan of rhyming patterns. I think they limit a poem to what they can rhyme, instead of what they can do to construct language.
But for what it is, I liked it.

Wow!!! i love this one so much...its so trut to it's word and i know what it's like...I have nothing else to say but i love it.... :)...keep up the good work....

That really reminded me of Romeo and Juliet, substituting the family rivalries for social stereotypes.. yep thats it in a nutshell. Also because it was tragic. Made me sad. I realize that poems that make me sad must be really really good or else I wouldn't feel anything.

This is really good ! keep it up!