Beautifuly penned write, and a true definition of the feeling of passion. Great poem.

As i said, this poem really is good. It does have some "pretty darn big" words in it lol but i got what it was trying to say (at least I think)--- Wonderful job!!!

xxEvilAngelxx

Dude I cannot BELIEVE we are the same age, Geez, I wish I could come up with big words... Hehe, AWESOME JOB! Very intense, I like it. I LOVE this part the best:

Laden with its depth of brutality,
Visitants of its wrath suffer,
Leave with an iota of impurity,
Driven towards insanity,
Dementia inwardly growing,

Awesome Job
5/5

Superb!