Very sad, and dark. how could someone be so cruel?
Well written with so much emotion
xxxxx

5/5. YOU MADE ME CRY! Omg.. I loved the ending about the seven year old boy!

Oh. My. F--king. God. This poem is amazing... Just the thought behind it is...it baffles me! I didn't expect something like this out of you...but, god damn! I am utterly proud. GREAT job!

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 10.5

Aww. Very pretty. So sad. Some serious emotion going on. 5/5

Hannah-

The beginning was just slightly confusing, in that by Five I didn't realize at once that you meant five years old... I loved the ending though... I had to read it twice, maybe I am slow, but once i grasped the meaning I realized just how strong it was.
A very special piece of writing.

//T.L.//

Very good rhythm. Great poem keep up the great work.

There's quite a message in this poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the ending ... wasn't expecting it! Nice job.

I LOVE THIS POEM.It brought tears to my eyes.

That is amazing. i loved the story, the emotions the imagery. keep up ur skill.

Too be so young, you are VERY talented. Give yourself a pat on the back for a job well done!

Wow. that's all i could say... it touches on a very sore point for me and i wish i was able to write it out like you did... thanks

The poem is flawless because it has two sides in it. You have described how daddy became a hero just with the beautiful last line. This is a superb write dear. I appriciate you for sharing this quality piece. Max ratings 5/5 all the way.

With love
Fsams

Omg how sad.
i cannot even begin to imagine.
this is really sad.
but i love it.
great work

Such a twist to the story line and so prophetic...in a way the reader is both sorry it happened and happy it became so positive to someone else who felt what was going on from a different perspective. very well written

So sad and deep. Excellent write. Very smooth and easy-going. I loved the starting, very eye-catching, excellent job, keep it up.

I really enjoy this one. Nice writing and sentimental!!!