Makebelieve

by ALEX   Oct 17, 2006


"Will you go out with me?"
In her mind, she hears those words
leaving his lips.
They make her smile.
"Will you go out with me?"
She hears it again. His voice
sounds so sweet.
She wishes it wasn't makebelieve.

10/17/06

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. keep up the great work. you are a good poet.5/5 if ever you would like me to read a poem of your's just ask:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    It was a short but very well written poem!
    its somehow sad... but very well done...
    it was written from the heart... and that what makes it good...
    keep it up 5/5 always...

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You have a great talent, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very short but gets across how she feels. well done, it was good

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