Comments : Makebelieve

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Very short but gets across how she feels. well done, it was good

  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    You have a great talent, 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    It was a short but very well written poem!
    its somehow sad... but very well done...
    it was written from the heart... and that what makes it good...
    keep it up 5/5 always...

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. keep up the great work. you are a good poet.5/5 if ever you would like me to read a poem of your's just ask:)