You Dont Know Me

by Suffering Soul   Oct 18, 2006


My eyes are black
but blue to you
you see the smiles
none of them true
i've lost control of everything
my body's not my own
something else is using me
but still they are unknown
i slice my arm so tenderly
i do not wish to die
but once again
i cut the skin
my eyes continue to cry
This death this pain
it just wont stop
my blood is running
the knife it drops.
i fall to my knees
its ending today
i look out the window
i just want to stay
my thoughts are all spinning
i'm happy but why?
this world i'm now leaving
the blood starts to dry
the world goes silent
i'm here all alone
i close now my eyes
i get to go home.

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxXTwistedxXxIllusionXxX

    It is a really good poem... I can relate in some way but I can't relate in others, you want to know something I reliazed... when you cry and you cut you only feel the pain from the crying (it seems to always work that way)... I love the poem though.... keep up the good writing

    ~Black Cross

  • 18 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Awesome job. Great emotion. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up!

    Steph

  • 18 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    +.+I saw ur quote (well not really a quote, you were just askin ppl to come and read ur poem. lol) So I came. ur poem is really good. and that's exactly how i feel. ppl say that if you cut you want to die. that's not true. you may really want to live, but you still cut as a way to get through. it's a bit annoying when ppl who know nothin about it start to act like they do. well anyways. i really loved this poem. 4/5. and i'll vote. plz come and read my HoStAgE/TaKeR!! Thankx+.+

  • 18 years ago

    by Andi

    This is really great....really beautiful, and really sad...it brought tears to my eyes....it reminds me of things i've went through and that one of my close friends is now going through...it hit really close to home....most definately keep up te good work....if u could comment on my poems id appreciate it
    andi