by Suffering Soul Oct 18, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
My eyes are black |
It is a really good poem... I can relate in some way but I can't relate in others, you want to know something I reliazed... when you cry and you cut you only feel the pain from the crying (it seems to always work that way)... I love the poem though.... keep up the good writing |
Awesome job. Great emotion. I enjoyed it a lot. Keep it up! |
+.+I saw ur quote (well not really a quote, you were just askin ppl to come and read ur poem. lol) So I came. ur poem is really good. and that's exactly how i feel. ppl say that if you cut you want to die. that's not true. you may really want to live, but you still cut as a way to get through. it's a bit annoying when ppl who know nothin about it start to act like they do. well anyways. i really loved this poem. 4/5. and i'll vote. plz come and read my HoStAgE/TaKeR!! Thankx+.+ |
by Andi
This is really great....really beautiful, and really sad...it brought tears to my eyes....it reminds me of things i've went through and that one of my close friends is now going through...it hit really close to home....most definately keep up te good work....if u could comment on my poems id appreciate it |