by Angie
Nice poem. Very well written. The only thing i'd take another look at is your punctuation. I think you forgot some periods at the end of your stanza's. Other then that, interesting write! My fav. lines would have to be: |
by xxMagioxx
Great jobon this poem, I can so relate, I just feel if I got too close to someone, I will evenually hurt them or they hurt me. |