Comments : Alone

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Nice poem. Very well written. The only thing i'd take another look at is your punctuation. I think you forgot some periods at the end of your stanza's. Other then that, interesting write! My fav. lines would have to be:

    "Pushing people away,
    That's all I do,
    But I push them away,
    For their own good"

    Maybe because I can relate to is somewhat.

    Keep up the awesome work!

    5/5

    --Angie xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by xxMagioxx

    Great jobon this poem, I can so relate, I just feel if I got too close to someone, I will evenually hurt them or they hurt me.

    Tony :D love ya