Comments : Would you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hmmm...interesting for sure, makes me answer Yes and No while reading it.
    It is very deep for sure a deeper story is behind those thought provoking lines of questions..

    Keep on writing on what you feel and like.

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I love this .
    It`s good and it`s deep .
    I keep thinking to myself yes and no .
    Keep it fresh` hun` .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    The rhyme scheme was a little off so the flow wasn't perfect, but it was pretty good despite that. It was very sweet and had so many questions you wish you could answer before you became friends with someone! It was a well thought out poem! Jpoet*

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Omg that was great 5/5 keep it coming

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Hmm..this is a kewlies poem..bcuz i can relate to it...and makes me wonder if i hav a true frind....hmm...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww wow this is really good. i really like this poem a lot. i think you did a wonderful job on writing it. keep it up 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    This is a good poem. i enjoyed the read.

  • 17 years ago

    by TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

    I really liked it, girl!..Yes, thats exactly what is bothering us all day about someone special and close to our hearts..."what would they do?"Oh, yeah..sometimes it is so sad to receive your answers too late, when their actions just break you deep inside..Anyway, i guess im just going away of the topic and talking about my own experience..But i loved it, great work!Keep it up!
    Best wishes,

    TILLmyLASTtearFALLS