I think you know the answer already...you should give this to his!!!its sweet but sad, im sure hell understand...have you heard that one quote that says, "if you love someone, let them free, if they come back to you, its cause its meant to be..."

This is so amazing! Your poetry is so good!
Leaving you right now
Is like saying I don't want to be in Heaven
I loved those lines the best! Great, great job!
Charisma*

Wow.
That was terribly sad but yet at times it was so sweet.
Wonderful job all together though. I'm sure there are many people that can relate to this poem, I know I can. =[
You're a really talented writer, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

Gd