Through my tears and my blood

by Piece of Me   Oct 18, 2006


All I did was love you
All you did was hurt me
I still love you and i don't know why
through my tears, my pain,
my blood, and my bruises...
I still love you
You tore me apart: inside and out
but my pleas and screams
were never enough
People asked "why do u stay"
and i always answered
"Because I love him"
I tried to talk to you
to tell you no and please please baby stop
but you still didn't listen
so, i made my choice
i know that i can't be with you
but I know that i can't live without you
so, I'll say goodbye
one last and very final goodbye
you took my heart, my love, and soul
I'm just taking the one think i have left
I'm sorry! I love you!
but I'm taking my life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Zelly

    Ain't that the truth!! I like it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Very good poem, and it's truth sometimes we love someone so much we accept them hurting us and breaking our hearts. I really can relate to this and know many can...GP

  • 18 years ago

    by Purple

    It's good, but it isn't exellent (and my spelling sucks air), this line 'through my tears, my pain, my blood, and my bruises... I still love you' could have been broken into two with I still love you being the second line. I think it owuld have been easier to read. When you wrote tired to talk, did you mean tried to talk? Either works, but tried makes more sense.

    It sounds good, but nothing is extremely skill full and I'm not in a mood to re-read and search for the good. you get a 4/5 because I think it was good, emotoinal, meaningfull, went well, but had a few errors and wasn't extrememly well written.

    If you have any complants, you know how to get ahold of me, or your dumb.

    ~Purple~

  • 18 years ago

    by Ridd1ck Yulas

    Very very ery good i love it!

    p.s. comment on ine too k?

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