Very very ery good i love it!

p.s. comment on ine too k?

It's good, but it isn't exellent (and my spelling sucks air), this line 'through my tears, my pain, my blood, and my bruises... I still love you' could have been broken into two with I still love you being the second line. I think it owuld have been easier to read. When you wrote tired to talk, did you mean tried to talk? Either works, but tried makes more sense.

It sounds good, but nothing is extremely skill full and I'm not in a mood to re-read and search for the good. you get a 4/5 because I think it was good, emotoinal, meaningfull, went well, but had a few errors and wasn't extrememly well written.

If you have any complants, you know how to get ahold of me, or your dumb.

~Purple~

Very good poem, and it's truth sometimes we love someone so much we accept them hurting us and breaking our hearts. I really can relate to this and know many can...GP

Ain't that the truth!! I like it!