by LadyPearl Oct 18, 2006
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
*Expanding freestyle; I dare you to comprehand it!!* |
Hmmmm...I'm not quite sure of the meaning of this poem, but I still love it! Amazing word choice and flow. You have so much talent as a poet so keep writing! =D 5/5 |
by Mousie
Wow that was great, really blows your mind... 5/5 |
The freestyle worked! Great poem! Even though I didn't fully understand it, I thought it was very well done. I got the impression that you're the child, and you don't want people blaming you for things. That's what I got out of it anyways. |
by Sweet lig
Wonderful and very interesting5/5 |
by Misstress
The flow lacks the tension and release., Its kinda hard to tackle the message of the poem, Im very poor at this deep kind of poems. |