Wow, this is another true great poem by a great poet..... 5/5 and tnx for sharing

Wow, very very confusing. I can tell there's a meaning, I just can't decide what it is. It's beautifully written though, and your word choice is commendable. I love the way it reads, nice work! 5/5

Woah! Great poem! I loved the words you used throughtout the poem. I love your choice of vocab, it really makes your peoms great! Well done, Keep it up!! xx

Wow you have a VERY strong vocabulary but I enjoyed to try and understand this poem but i pretty much i guess get it lol but it was Beautiful though. 5/5 You're very talented!

God Bless,
Taylor
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Excellent job, in the fullest sense of the word. At the beginning, I wasn't sure where the poem was going, and then the last three stanzas (especially the last two) really brought it all together in a very solid manner. Keep up the freestyling!

Yep, it's free style and it's pretty good free style too, but even freestyle needs punctuation.

How can you guide the reader through your work without it?

Give this poem to a friend and make them read it out loud and compare it to how it sounded in your own mind when you wrote it. That should give you a clear idea of my intention.

Bret

The flow lacks the tension and release., Its kinda hard to tackle the message of the poem, Im very poor at this deep kind of poems.
I think youve write it spontenously.
But a good read for sure, it makes me think.

Wonderful and very interesting5/5

The freestyle worked! Great poem! Even though I didn't fully understand it, I thought it was very well done. I got the impression that you're the child, and you don't want people blaming you for things. That's what I got out of it anyways.

The choice of words and vocabulary was a fantastic way to let out emotions. Very well written poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow that was great, really blows your mind... 5/5

Hmmmm...I'm not quite sure of the meaning of this poem, but I still love it! Amazing word choice and flow. You have so much talent as a poet so keep writing! =D 5/5