I HATE YOU!

by Letty   Oct 18, 2006


You made a thousand promises to me
And each one of them you broke.
Our lives together was suppose to be sweet
I guess our love was based on hope.

You lead me by a string for so many years
Because I had fallen deeply in for you
I have shed more than an ocean of tears
from the heartache you gave me too.

And now I hate you so much inside
Because I can not erase this pain
I faithfully placed all my trust in you
But you took my trust in vain

I hate you with every breathe that I take
between each crack of my heart
I wish nothing but the plague upon you
And I hope someone BREAKS YOUR HEART!

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  • 15 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    Wow this is really powerful and speaks to me. i can relate

  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Alan

    Great imagery with "between each crack of my heart" that line fits the tone and theme of this piece perfectly! Once again I speak from my own very humble opinion, I know both love and heartache can each inspire us... and while I think with love that inspiration knows no bounds, it's with heartache that the words seem to pierce and encompass one's feelings much more tried and true! Again, in my own foolishly humble opinion ;-)

    Richard

  • 18 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Man i know exactly how you feel ........ someone once made me think like you did......great work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Eddy

    Sad but not bad.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Wow.. im speechless.. this poem was full of emotions, and you truly have a talent for words, although you was expressing so much andger and hate, you still managed to keep your poem flowing well. this poem was very deep, and i could not take my eyes off o it till i got to the end. Inspiring peice. The only think i would say is take the caps off at the end, it kind of defeats the purpose, and seems more childish than the rest. but thats just my opinion. 5/5 though!
    Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

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