Wow this is really good

Wow this is really good

Wow that was soo good i kno how u feel my ex cheated on me wit a pregnate chick i guess....

Hey, excellent poem i gave u a 5 simply because there was so much emotion in it you can lalmost feel your anger and i know exactly how you feel. And it just flows so well. Im very pleased that you took your anger in this way. WELL DONE!!! :)

I LOVE IT

WOW I FEEL YOU!!! I HOPE THAT HAPPENS TO HIM TOO!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!

Wow.. im speechless.. this poem was full of emotions, and you truly have a talent for words, although you was expressing so much andger and hate, you still managed to keep your poem flowing well. this poem was very deep, and i could not take my eyes off o it till i got to the end. Inspiring peice. The only think i would say is take the caps off at the end, it kind of defeats the purpose, and seems more childish than the rest. but thats just my opinion. 5/5 though!
Please could you read and comment on some of my poems, i would love to hear from you. Thanks...Kirsty

Sad but not bad.

Man i know exactly how you feel ........ someone once made me think like you did......great work 5/5

Great imagery with "between each crack of my heart" that line fits the tone and theme of this piece perfectly! Once again I speak from my own very humble opinion, I know both love and heartache can each inspire us... and while I think with love that inspiration knows no bounds, it's with heartache that the words seem to pierce and encompass one's feelings much more tried and true! Again, in my own foolishly humble opinion ;-)

Richard

Wow this is really powerful and speaks to me. i can relate