Perception

by Jesse Miller   Oct 18, 2006


Stars watch from above
To them our love is so small
But to me it's vast

*my first haiku! please comment, critique and vote... it would mean alot to me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Another Dreamer

    Hey. this is so good! i really like haiku's! i'm actually quite a fan of them. most people see them and say thay aren't really a poem. but they don't understand how difficult it can be to write one. and what better topic to write a haiku on, than love. and for your first one! wow. very good. anyways- great job. 5/5 :)