This poem is only the 2nd Ive properly written and now its posted! I write from the heart, and then it just flows. The amazing thing is that everything I write is filled with such truth.

Oh my god, this poem is so good you had all the rythme and every thing i loved it,
you described it very well and it made the reader feel like they where there lol.
this is a great poem you should add it to your faveroits or what ever itrs called!!
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