I really understand what you mean in this poem, halloween has lost its original meaning, you conveyed your words well and it might just be me but some of it made me laugh, well done

Another great write. It felt as if Halloween was on today. It also was kind of funny. Keep up the great work!
5/5

Letty

I pour chocolates in their bowls
fill it up with sweets
wondering how they'd react
if i were to give them fruit as a 'treat.

great poem i love the rhyming ut i think if you switch "as a treat" to "as treats" it might read easier, i nedd to go back and read some more of you earlier poems, you deffinately have gotten better since your first poem but i need to read more of your begging poems tomorrow cause i got work now...great job L8r

Haha good ol' holloween lol definately the dentists busy time of the year excellent job 5/5