Alone

by mossgirl19   Oct 18, 2006


I walk alone
this lonely path
i see no one
behind my back.
i wasn't scared
but i was cold
the wind blew tough
as it was told.
i watch the sky
what gloomy stars
i saw the sea
it looked so sad
now i rest
beside a tree
it look so dark
as dark as me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    After reading the first two comments
    i felt bad just writting something simple like
    good flow and rhyming but thats what i like about it most it just kept singging it was
    just so easy to like. perfect actually
    I like the way you look at things. I will
    get to some of your other poems but not tonight its late Its amazing how fast time
    goes by

  • 14 years ago

    by UnhealthyExpectations

    I really like this one!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I can relate to melancholy and sad pieces-and this is great-except for the feeling it brings.Look at the stars at night, feel the wind rustling through the leaves-revel in being alive.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

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