Starfish

by Ashley Ann   Oct 18, 2006


You mess with my heart
And tear it to peices
with hurtful lies
and deceitful teases
You say I will be fine
when you dont know me at all
The littlest things make me cry
The simplest things make me fall
My heart is not a starfish
once broken, it stays the same
You think that I am joking,
You think this is a game
My heart does not get bigger,
only smaller by the day
If you want to get closer
hurting me is not the way
My heart is not a starfish
that can be cloned and duplicated
my heart is a tender, precious treasure
that should be loved and appreciated.

Copyright © Ashley Paul

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  • 18 years ago

    by Katie Bug :)

    I loved this poem. It captured the thoughts of many. And i absolutely loved the way You compared hearts to starfish. Amazing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Excellent! I loved your rhyming... I love the last 6 lines and the beginning four. Great Job!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Wow, wonderful! I love it! So sweet and I loved how you compared your heart to a starfish! Great job! 5/5 Keep up the good work!

    Innoc3ntStar

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmmm very nice titled STARFISH. actually it make me smile i love the message very wonderful.. wish u can write more 5/5 keep up the good work

    god bless

  • 18 years ago

    by awww

    Loved it... great job in comparing your heart to a starfish... i bet alot of people feel the same way too... its a great poem... i liked the rhyming too... it was easy to read and feel the meaning... 5/5! keep writing!

    ~angel~

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