by Mayra
Hey ashley good poem keep up the great work |
by Carolina g
AWW... Tahts so CUTE:) I agree with this a bunch, every guy should read it...keep up the good poetry :) |
by *Charisma*
An honestly 100% unique look on the heart. It's nice to read a new twist on something. I enjoyed. Jpoet* :) |
I love it ^^ |
Very cute! Well written and I enjoyed it. 5/5 for you. |
by X2892
WoW ur poem was really good 5/5 |
by Tammie
I like this alot. The flow was perfect, and i like how you compared your heart to a starfish. That is very unique. A great write! Keep it up. =] 5/5 |
by Letty
AWWW!!!! This is a beautifully written poem. I loved everything about it. You use some wonderful imagery in it and you worded it perfectly. I only have one suggestion though. I think that you should break it up into stanzas so that it will be easier to read. Great job! 5/5 |
by awww
Loved it... great job in comparing your heart to a starfish... i bet alot of people feel the same way too... its a great poem... i liked the rhyming too... it was easy to read and feel the meaning... 5/5! keep writing! |
by Sweet lig
Hmmm very nice titled STARFISH. actually it make me smile i love the message very wonderful.. wish u can write more 5/5 keep up the good work |
by Stephanie
Wow, wonderful! I love it! So sweet and I loved how you compared your heart to a starfish! Great job! 5/5 Keep up the good work! |
Excellent! I loved your rhyming... I love the last 6 lines and the beginning four. Great Job! |
by Katie Bug :)
I loved this poem. It captured the thoughts of many. And i absolutely loved the way You compared hearts to starfish. Amazing. 5/5 |