There Once Was a Girl

by Imperfect   Oct 18, 2006


There once was a girl,
Shut out from the world,

She never really fit in,
So there really wasn't a reason for her to live,

Her parents weren't the best,
They shut her out like the rest,

Her mom and dad drank,
While they watched her heart sink,

They drank to much,
As she then takes the razor and cuts,

She kept their deepest secret,
But she became their worst regret,

She wanted to be loved,
Instead all she got was shoved,

There in the corner,
She faces real life horror,

I guess u would say they beat her,
But it wasn't just to teach her,

She soon started to wear black,
And she didn't turn back,

The black,
Hides all the facts,

The black helped her hide,
From all the people on the other side,

She was always picked on,
But there wasn't a thing she had done,

One girl got to no her,
And shes no longer a loner,

They became the best of friends,
And promised it till the end,

Along came a guy,
And at first she was shy,

He liked her,
That was a first,

Nobody really liked it,
Some threw a fit,

But it all changed because of this guy,
She no longer wanted to die,

He took her away into this place,
Where she felt nothing but safe,

He looked beyond her thick eyeliner,
And tried to find her,

He was so close but yet so far,
She was lost in the dark,

He must have saw something,
Or maybe nothing,

Then he changed his mind,
And now her heart hanging from thread, unwinds,

Piece by piece she falls apart,
All because of a broken heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey. Thanks lots for the comment you gave me. Hehe, I just came home from a horrible day and I can honestly say that you made me smile so big. Thanks for that! Anyway, I felt like I should repay the favour and leave you a comment aswell. Unfortunately I don't have alot of time, so I'll try and get back to you again later (most likely in an email - being that my computer doesn't let me post on love poems; I get signed out. Not sure why.) But for right now I just want to say that I loved the individual voice you had in this one. It told a full and complete story the way I haven't seen in a while, and you weren't afraid to put some character in aswell - that's rare. I hope that none of this is real, and if it is then feel free to drop me a message whenever need be. I hope all is well for you :). Bye for now. -Stefhy

  • 18 years ago

    by SadKuteAngel

    Aww how sad... i love it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Imperfect

    Well this isnt the poem... its the love causes broken hearts... but yeah thank you

  • 18 years ago

    by Batman

    TELL HIM..i MEAN GIVE IT TO HIM...
    YES YES YES...awww thats so sad....dont worry in the end you'l be smiling...just wait.