That was really beautiful and heart breading at the same time I can relate b/c my brother was never around for me but yet he was always lingering in the shadows of my life telling me not to do this and that cause he did it and got hurt or failed or something of the sort. Keep writing good work!

~Danni~

Omg, wow that was amazing. it was so good. it was sad too. but rly great. i luv u, ur amazing, keep up your writing, its great!!

I love it.... i love it because i was like the audiance to this tragic movie, the listening ear..... actually, just the friend who tried to be there for the little sister and who like the big brother, always had your well being at heart, even if sometimes it didnt seem like it....

Eventhough it was a bit sad but i think ur poem is great! ur poem is very nice. keep writing sis!