Soldier in a Box

by disturbed one   Oct 18, 2006


Soldier in a Box

Fighting myself between these walls,
Trying to find a door,
Tearing my heart out,
Trying to end this war,

My head is filled with,
These thoughts that consume,
I cant escape,
This might as well be my tomb,

Looking for the key,
To unlock these locks,
I cant stay here,
Im like a soldier in a box

Hope you liked it cuz i didnt really like the second verse but oh well...lol please rate and comment and i shall return the favor

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  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Perhaps u should have gone to school...dumb dumb dummy head :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessie

    That's a rockin poem!! Har Har. Man I'm bored at home alone. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by aisyned

    I like all the verses goodjob!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Very nice. I liked it. Thank you very much for the comments it was greatly apreicated.5/5

    God Bless,
    Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Hmm...out of 3 or 4 people i know that have read this poem you are the first to say you like the second verse...lol...even i dont like it...=P

    thanks again for the comments

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