I think its really pretty x i dont think it needs to realli be edited its pure and jus kinda simple xx i really like it xx

Very well written I really liked it. It deffinatly deserves a 5!

God Bless,
Taylor

But this is reaaly good.. i think u dont need to edit coz this is really good and nice flow.. well keep on writing what all i like and feel great job of yours 5/5

takecare!

But this is reaaly good.. i think u dont need to edit coz this is really good and nice flow.. well keep on writing what all i like and feel great job of yours 5/5

takecare!

Nothing at all wrong with the descriptions and feeling--they were great. I felt like the rhythm was a little shaky in a few parts, and perhaps the phrasing may have been a tad (but only a tad) awkward in a couple places. If possible, I would have given it a 4.5, but it's whole numbers only, so I say 5--good job!.

I don't think you have to edit any parts of the poem because its more than perfect in its own way...at least for me =)
this is truly right,..I adored your last stanza of how he got the power to heal her or tear her..OMG thats absolutely wonderful

I just wanna tell you that I'm not praising or complimenting...I do say my honest opinion!
I'm in love with this poem,Hehe!

keep it up, Waiting For More To Come ;)
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Hey, I really like your poem,it has alot of meaning to it. I don't think you have to edit it at all..just keep it the way it is:P

I like ur poem is dosent need to be edited for someone who was half sleepin in class did an awsome job writing this poem...

Wow...this is the most amazing poem ever i really loved it keep the good job up!

take care
jammal

Wow, another very nice one. I love the last stanza, about love her, or tear her apart. So true. :) It doesn't need to be edited.

5/5

Kind Regards,
Luna

I liked this very much, it was sweet yet sad at the same time, and the flow was good. Don't let the downvoters bother you, they are just stuupid. A 5/5 from me.

This is wikkid wikkid cute!!!!
omg i love love love it!!!

This is soooo very true,if you read if from you heart...When a girl falls in love,
She can't control her heart.
But you have the power,
To love her, or tear her apart...EXCELLENT part of this if people would just read it.NOT add anything just READ it for what it says ..

Rania

Great poem i loved it... my favorite part is the last part!

Very well written!! i love this poem! its awesome + has great emtions!! keep it up!!

_Mya_

This is really good ! keep it up!

Well written