Beauty Of Water

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Oct 18, 2006


Flickering with elation deep within the water,
Pixies glow graciously to speak of love.
Liquid so grandigious dancing to shine,
As the moon radiates light from above.

Gentle sweeping water, flowing with pride,
Push away the dreaming spirits of tonight.
Socery of liquid by love quickly takes over the lie,
Of gurgling water, to the shores of light.

Water so beautiful, so loving and grand,
Flows deeply set within a tone of blue,
Shining with pride of many gods,
Sipping up lies, turning them true.

This is what binding water falls do,
Sitting handsomely amongst the wind of fair,
Lending an ear of sympathic pity,
This is the beauty of the water so rare.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ALEX

    "This is the beauty of the water so rare."

    an amazing closing line, i must say.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    This poem was filled with great descriptions and I really loved the ending lines, I do not know why, I just did.

    5/5

    -Jenna.

  • 18 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Great poem! I love the choice of words you used throughout it. The image it creates is really beautiful. congrats on your 100th poem! Keep them up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Fantastic choice of words .
    This was a beautiful poem .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    I thought the imagery was beautiful an dthe repition of some words actually did this poem wonders. I think my favorite line was of the sipping lies but turning them true. I don't know mych to say but you know I comment your poems for a reason: They're good.

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