CONGRATS ON YOUR 100th POEM!!! Wonderful job!!!

Very beautiful!
5/5

God Bless,
Taylor

I thought the imagery was beautiful an dthe repition of some words actually did this poem wonders. I think my favorite line was of the sipping lies but turning them true. I don't know mych to say but you know I comment your poems for a reason: They're good.

Fantastic choice of words .
This was a beautiful poem .
..ღ__MiNDYY

Great poem! I love the choice of words you used throughout it. The image it creates is really beautiful. congrats on your 100th poem! Keep them up!!

This poem was filled with great descriptions and I really loved the ending lines, I do not know why, I just did.

5/5

-Jenna.

"This is the beauty of the water so rare."

an amazing closing line, i must say.