Marvelous rhyming. extremely heart felt...i loevd it. i can relate alot and this poem was really just beautiful...
thank you sooo much for the comment, it really meant ALOT to me.
i guess i'm pretty new at poetry, too, and my brother is also the one who really introduced me to it, although my friend showed me this website.
your poems are all wonderful and neever stop writing.
much love,
farah

Great poem 5/5 but i did think it coulde been a little longer!

Great poem 5/5 but i did think it coulde been a little longer!