Comments : The Future Holds

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Love the choice of words .
    This is beautiful .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 18 years ago

    by A Christoffer

    A loved how each stanza was a small poem in itself but still fit together perfectly with the rest of the poem! it was wonderfully done! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    My favourite by you =)
    I loved this part [Don't turn back on your life,
    and believe in what you have.
    It may not be much and big,
    but smile about small stuff; laugh.]
    Really touched me. Lol the flow was great and the idea was sweet,true and hopeful. Well done x]

  • 18 years ago

    by Mousie

    Really good job... this was the best one i've read so far... great keep it up 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This is an amazing poem!
    and its soo true!!!
    you never know what the future holds...
    keep it up !:D