by robin milford Oct 19, 2006
category :
Fun, humor /
about society
One day i met a pick pocket |
by Wallace
Very interesting, although the flow was off but I enjoyed it still. |
by Perfection
A bit short and silly but rather entertaining... though I wish you would have humiliated the thief some more =) |
by Marie
I liked the words, the story, even most of the rhyming but honestly the rhythm seemed all over the place. |