+.+Aww. That's so beautiful and so sad......U really are great at writing. Lol. well i saw that you were askin for some-one to write a comment for you so I thought i do the favour. Now you owe me. Lol. I was unsure at first cuz the poem started a little slow, but it soon got into the rhthym. I think your very good 4/5+.+

Wonderful write.....sad yet lovely at the same. Emotions are for sure felt in this one.

Kimmaly