Beautiful sad penned you potray here, you express them well with beautiful emotions, well done!

anyway, thanks for your nice comment you left on my stuff, i very appreciated! have a great day, take care.

I personally don't think a poem needs to be long to be good. I like this the way it is, Except I do think you could maybe make the stanza's within the same size for flow reasons instead of one longer than the other but seriously, the length is great. Twas emotional and well expressed.
Good job =)