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by Beautiful Catastrophe   Oct 19, 2006


A dark alley,
a lonely road,
a sad night,
im all alone.
i keep going back to the place from my dream,
theres no way out and no one to hear me scream.
stupid mistakes a little dumb lie, those hurtful words,
are the reason i cry.
i said i would stop,
i promise i tried,
i kept going back,
and thats the reason i lied.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I love how you worked in so many raw emotions into such a short poem. You express your feelings very beautifully. Nice work. Shanik

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    I liked it, very good. Keep it up. Your poems say a lot and mean a lot. Loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chrissi

    It's pretty good i like it a lot .To tell the truth It feels like your me. What you feel like is what i feel like. but you did a good job 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    Hey i really like this!! i think u r really great at writin poetry!

    p.s thanks for the comment on my featured poem! :D

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