Darkness

by End Of Eternity   Oct 19, 2006


Flowing with the rhythm of waves
dancing with the leaves in storm
screaming with every thunder
and you wonder where it came from

bleeding with the tears of my wounds
crawling within the bushes of memories
i cried your name a thousand times
hoping for you to turn, to hear me please

screaming with these creatures on my wall
as they now remind me of what i have lost
staring at the crystal ball which knows my fate
is fading slowly, darkness is all that i have got

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    I liked this very much, although, I must ask. And, maybe I'm just being a BIT ignorant, but I was wondering how you happened to choose the title for this piece. I thought I got the feel of your write here, but maybe I just didn't get the message. Still, all in all, I thought it was well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    Your wording was brilliant and due to that, the flow fitted perfectly.
    Excellent poem! Dark and stormy! Just how i like them!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Almost broken

    Wow that was really great

  • 18 years ago

    by ~I ♥ BEN~

    I Love It, Its just so dark

  • 18 years ago

    by Your Best Mistake Your Perfect Failure

    Niccee.
    I loved the way it flowed.

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