I like this poem it is very good you should write some more and thank you for the comment love linda 5/5

A wonderfully written poem about a person who has been hurt by someone she thought she loved, I've been there, and its good that you saw it before it was too late. Your poem was lovely, keep writing everything out. Things will get better, I know it. 5/5.

Hey hun beautiful poem nicely written.. i got to say i know what you are talking about hope all is well...Rachy

Your style is so very different. In some ways its like most of the other poems on this site, and I am also guilty of writing about love in a sort of cliched way, but then its completely original and uncliched at the same time. Perplexing... I liked it.

And good riddence to that person, keep on writing hunni its the best outlet for ones emotions xox sam