"I believe your heart belongs with mine."

My fave line.
This whole poem was so heartfelt.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

"I believe your heart belongs with mine"

I have to agree with the pervious comment. That's my fav line. very meaningful to me. Feeling every word. Wonderful write.

Even though I'm scared of getting hurt
I'm going to take a chance

that was my favourite line, sometimes to truely be happy you need to take a chance, it was a romantic poem about the first signs of a beauitful love x

Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!! Another great write. Again it was beautifully penned. I loved every stanza that you wrote. But I have one problem. In the second stanza you wrote:

He's everything I ever wished for
Smart caring and kind
Whoever knew that
my soul mate I would find?

I think that instead of saying,

whoever knew that
my soul mate I would find

You should have said:

Who would have known
That my soul mate I would find?

Well that's the only thing that I saw that I think should have been fixed.

Keep up the excellent work! 5/5

Love
Letty

Very good poem it kept me hooked the whole time. My favorite stanzas are the first and last, Your rhyming was awesome! the Flow of the poem was great
good job!
5/5

I couldnt find your other poems so i picked two that i would read aswel this was really good i have already read alot of oyur poems as i found myself re- reading some of them lol oops nice poem tho xxx alex xxx (3)

OMG!!! i absolutly LOVE it!!!!!!! i feel the same way with my boy, wow, i think i feel a tear drop coming...(^_^)
lol, well check out my poems, and i'll stay checking yours! peace, hugs and kisses 4 ya ***muah***

Well, i can really relate to this poem alot and i know the feeling to find someone that you think is the one for you but you're not sure that you're the one for him. Great poem!!!

This poem was really good=)