Comments : Your Heart Belongs With Mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    "I believe your heart belongs with mine."

    My fave line.
    This whole poem was so heartfelt.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kimmaly

    "I believe your heart belongs with mine"

    I have to agree with the pervious comment. That's my fav line. very meaningful to me. Feeling every word. Wonderful write.

  • 18 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Even though I'm scared of getting hurt
    I'm going to take a chance

    that was my favourite line, sometimes to truely be happy you need to take a chance, it was a romantic poem about the first signs of a beauitful love x

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!! Another great write. Again it was beautifully penned. I loved every stanza that you wrote. But I have one problem. In the second stanza you wrote:

    He's everything I ever wished for
    Smart caring and kind
    Whoever knew that
    my soul mate I would find?

    I think that instead of saying,

    whoever knew that
    my soul mate I would find

    You should have said:

    Who would have known
    That my soul mate I would find?

    Well that's the only thing that I saw that I think should have been fixed.

    Keep up the excellent work! 5/5

    Love
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Very good poem it kept me hooked the whole time. My favorite stanzas are the first and last, Your rhyming was awesome! the Flow of the poem was great
    good job!
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I couldnt find your other poems so i picked two that i would read aswel this was really good i have already read alot of oyur poems as i found myself re- reading some of them lol oops nice poem tho xxx alex xxx (3)

  • 18 years ago

    by LiveForHim

    OMG!!! i absolutly LOVE it!!!!!!! i feel the same way with my boy, wow, i think i feel a tear drop coming...(^_^)
    lol, well check out my poems, and i'll stay checking yours! peace, hugs and kisses 4 ya ***muah***

  • 18 years ago

    by dineshia

    Well, i can really relate to this poem alot and i know the feeling to find someone that you think is the one for you but you're not sure that you're the one for him. Great poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    This poem was really good=)