Comments : Time

  • 16 years ago

    by linkhorizon

    There is a time for laughter
    and a time for sorrow
    a there to share
    and a time to borrow
    there is a time to smile
    and a time to cry
    a time to live
    and a time to die
    there is a time for words
    and a time for scilence...

    listen to what isn't said

    i thought even though this piece was short and simple, the message you conveyed was lucid and very strong. i especially adored the last line, very powerful. sometimes we don't see the underlying problems people go through and either ignore them or just to blind to see. nice poem you have here. enjoyed it very much. 5/5

    i would love it if you ever have the opportunity to comment/vote one of my poems. i will continue reading your work and post comments on your work. keep that pen flowing. lots of love and peace. take care.