Thinking of you

Ooooh. I like it!
Kudos!
This is definately your best by far.
However, I would seperate the stanzas with punctuation; if you need help with that, just ask me. =]

I really loved this...it was very beautiful. Just, yeah.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Wow this is just simply wonderful. you did such a great job writing this. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

Kristen is right with the "A"'s you have there but you did an amazing job though. I really loved this one also && how you did nature for love. very creative.

keep it up. keep on writing. love always && forever.

This was another beautiful pen by you.
But I think it would have been so much better if you would have left out some of the a's and if you wouldn't have made some of the words plural. For example you wrote:

A rustling leaves
A gentle murmuring winds
A sound of river flows
A scary thunder noises
A romantic pouring rains
Whispers your name with me
That I'm thinking of you with LOVE...

You should just make the first line read:

Rustling leaves

And the second should read:

A gentle murmuring wind

The third:

The sound of the river flowing

and so on. I hope that you don't get upset because this is just my oppinion. This is truly a beautiful poem. Keep up the great work. 5/5

Letty

This was excellent, 5/5--this was a successful portrayance of the serene feelings of nature and it was interesting how you connected them with love. There were some errors in usage; here's how the poem probably should be:
"Rustling leaves
Gently murmuring winds
The sound of the river flowing
The scary thunder noises
A romantic, pouring rain
Whispers your name with me
And I'm thinking of you with LOVE..."
This is a little more gramatically correct than the rough draft, but you don't have to change anything. Once again, good job, and 5/5.