Hypocritical

by just a little girl   Oct 19, 2006


I can give advice but I can't take it
I know from mine they will benefit
They get over it but I stay the same
I pretend its okay because of my shame
Yes I know that its hypocritical
But secretly Im looking for my angle
Who can fly in and take me away
I know it wont happen today
But I can still help everyone else
Its better than trying to help myself

Written from my experiences of talking to people with problems while I can't help myself

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    P.s. You are correct, there are no questions in this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I loved this poem alot. really emotional. really good. keep writing, my friend
    xxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by just a little girl

    *note from the author about brets comment* i dont believe that there is a question in my poem so i did not use a question mark,
    tell me if im wrong somebody?

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow....another favourite. This was so moving, i thought it was perfect.

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Great poem! You really understand what you're trying to say and thats the best thing a poem does. Keep up the good work! 5/5

    Taylor

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