This poem is begging for punctuation. It has a question, so use a question mark, is that so difficult?

Punctuation guides the reader through your work and they'll get out as much as you put in. Guide me, direct me, show me your vision, not lines and words.

Bret

Great poem! You really understand what you're trying to say and thats the best thing a poem does. Keep up the good work! 5/5

Taylor

Wow....another favourite. This was so moving, i thought it was perfect.

*note from the author about brets comment* i dont believe that there is a question in my poem so i did not use a question mark,
tell me if im wrong somebody?

I loved this poem alot. really emotional. really good. keep writing, my friend
xxxxxx

P.s. You are correct, there are no questions in this poem.