I luv the last line in your poem "I only wish I had that boy that brought me roses and knelt down on his knee again."..it makes the poem even more meaningful..":)definetly a 5 for me!

Wow....im impressed your a great writer

Your poems are amaaaaazing. I know what is it like to be with someone who treats you like some dirt he stood on, but then you love him, cant see past him, convince yourself that you will change so that he doesnt need to have a go at you. Convince yourself it is your fault. Believe me you slog your guts out trying to make them happy and you never will becuase they dont know any other way to be anf they will never ever change. It hurts but it is true. Your poems are the best.

Kelly
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