by Kristina Oct 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm forced to live a lie, |
by Sandra D
That's really sad, but it's beautiful. you're an amazing writer! i love the part where it's like... |
by David
The words you use are so unique. |
by Allison
I liked it......though it seemed like in the first couple of stanzas you wanted to rhyme. Its still a 5/5 |
by ellewen
I think this poem is fantastic. I know somewhat how you feel. Maybe different situations but I can honestly say I get you according to the words you speak. Things like this really mean allot to me. I like to see such truth. I really liked how you rhymed too. |
You knwo what would be great with this!? a song, if you made this somehow into a song this would be amazing!!! this is a great poem i thought it was great! 5/5 |