This is a really good poem. It kind of reminds me of how i feel most of the time.

Wow! Great poem, I can relate, trust me. You're a great writer hun! 5/5 Keep up the great work! You should read my poem on my other account called Locked Up Pain. It's old though.

Innoc3ntStar

Aw that sad. I hope things get better hun. Great poem by the way! 5/5.

God Bless,
Taylor

First stanza so true for myself keep it up

Interesting rhyme scheme, powerful poem. Very... how would you say... accurate to the dramas of the soul?

You knwo what would be great with this!? a song, if you made this somehow into a song this would be amazing!!! this is a great poem i thought it was great! 5/5

I think this poem is fantastic. I know somewhat how you feel. Maybe different situations but I can honestly say I get you according to the words you speak. Things like this really mean allot to me. I like to see such truth. I really liked how you rhymed too.

I liked it......though it seemed like in the first couple of stanzas you wanted to rhyme. Its still a 5/5

Alyson

The words you use are so unique.

i gave it a 5. excellent. the story to this poem was very touching. i loved it a lot.

david

That's really sad, but it's beautiful. you're an amazing writer! i love the part where it's like...
"The real me is to painful,
For this world to see,
They would not understand,
The things that I believe."
that part really got to me, but in a good way! great job!! 5/5!

*Shawte*