Thank you for commenting on my poems, this poem I like alot girl! I think thats how I feel with my kids dad, I haven't talked to him in a week and when I do he asks me what ive been doing, but when I ask him the same he says don't worry about it, Im starting to feel like this, I dont want him to know anything because if he cared he would be here. Anyways that was a great poem

Cool poem it makes me think if I ever get to see my ex-girl again, what would I say?
I give you a 5 :)

Thanks for all your comments! I've read a few of your poems and the only suggestion I have is to try having your stanzas rhyme just a little better because sometimes the do and sometimes they don't and it just makes it hard to follow. But you have some neat ideas so keep working with it. Jpoet*

Very good emoton! Somethin' I can relate too. Ill giv it a '5'

I'm sorry if you ever felt this way. I know what it can be like to keep feelings locked away, it's too much. take care and good stuff :)