by adie Oct 19, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Sometimes there is a drought in my soul |
A sunburned soul ey? It wasn't my favorite poem but you did an alright job. The title was interesting. The metaphor you used was very unique. The poem didn't personally draw me in though. That's just me though. I'll give it a three. I enjoyed the descriptive words you used by the way. |