Thanks to you...

by MischieviousMya   Oct 19, 2006


Standing right in from of me
is nothing but my shadow
when you left me my life turned
upside down, i began to feel like widow.

Im crushed you know it
yet at the same time you dont care.
your right we played games on each other, but only i was fair.

You left me to crumble and break down in front of everyone, kudos to you.... im officially broken.

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  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    "I'm crushed you know it
    yet at the same time you don't care."
    Utterly fantastic. Glad I found your post and took the time to read this, it was well worth it. 5 from me. Keep scribbling, and I'll keep reading!

  • 18 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Aww, thats sad.

    there were areas u could fix up a bit tho.

    it reminded me of one of my poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by robin milford

    Good poem i enjoyed it thanks for comment on "betrayed"

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Hey Mya, hun` .
    This is kinda confusing when yur stanzas aren`t like entered and stuff . Try doing that, and it`ll be easier to read . (: Some grammatical mistakkes, but overall I think this is fine .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

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