Hey Mya, hun` .
This is kinda confusing when yur stanzas aren`t like entered and stuff . Try doing that, and it`ll be easier to read . (: Some grammatical mistakkes, but overall I think this is fine .
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Good poem i enjoyed it thanks for comment on "betrayed"

Aww, thats sad.

there were areas u could fix up a bit tho.

it reminded me of one of my poems.

"I'm crushed you know it
yet at the same time you don't care."
Utterly fantastic. Glad I found your post and took the time to read this, it was well worth it. 5 from me. Keep scribbling, and I'll keep reading!