by Sorefromreality Oct 19, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I look in the mirror everyday |
by Phantompixie
It was good |
by Tripp
Like the others said, this is a very unique poem...the subject is something I doubt I've read anywhere else, which makes it good :). Unique = good. Or in this case, very good. I liked the talk of eyes being the window to your soul, yet yours are plain...very deep. |
by Purple
The third and last stanza's rhyming scheme seemed a litttle off, but besides that it was good. Go through the atomatic list of flow, rythem, ryhm, connectoin to reader, emotoin, meaning, consistency... You did good. |
by Tammie
The title caught my eye, which is always a good thing. The topic is unique, and i like the meaning you put into this poem. How you worked in the title to the ending of the poem made the ending stronger, a very good write. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5 |