The title caught my eye, which is always a good thing. The topic is unique, and i like the meaning you put into this poem. How you worked in the title to the ending of the poem made the ending stronger, a very good write. Keep it up hun. =] 5/5

Love,
Tammie xo

The third and last stanza's rhyming scheme seemed a litttle off, but besides that it was good. Go through the atomatic list of flow, rythem, ryhm, connectoin to reader, emotoin, meaning, consistency... You did good.

I'm going to give you a 4/5 because of those two little chinks, but that's pritty good on my scale.

I'd apreaite a comment back, but it's not required.

~Purple~

Like the others said, this is a very unique poem...the subject is something I doubt I've read anywhere else, which makes it good :). Unique = good. Or in this case, very good. I liked the talk of eyes being the window to your soul, yet yours are plain...very deep.

good job, keep it up

It was good
but I didnt really like how you rhymed
"soul" with "soul"